cathexis

well
apart fram b ing a deep wet dark subject... what lyes there
in da puit of battam less
try thys 4 size.... the latest fram da biche...
well sum parks that have been registered as parks...communitye style
are not sum cummuniti know
it turns out the son of the original lawyers ['son']? on the project when it was originially surveyed in the sixties? youi wood have 2 ask the wildone=neo, has sum hoe goooten aholt of the titles. New titles, which do not speci 4 kall i
say 'park' will now sell these 2 da 'highest' bidder
wot the bumba klaws r dese rasses hi on? pcp or lsd. dey really b hallucinatin
and the only biche rasin a question..is only doin so coz biche anint gonna make her mordida... so shallow u cunt see her battam..if u wonton
belizeans.. unyte and show dese rassklauses who run tings...events now unfold
of tymes untold..coz dese b di new brand of pirates...evrywhere u look
legion 4 youi b mani

the matrix is the world/box that has been pulled over your eyes...by youir fathers............lies

chapter three

the phuk-you frog
thys asswiope cuntsistentlee deliver a plate of ptoe mainetoe your mouth
everyday i hear of one and even two accounts of food poisoning out of this el cheapo fast fraud
one person went back five tymes...everytime sick... hea says.. ill talk to the cook...
sum management....f-
colonel imitating wanna b impastor
he even goes as far as tryin to start a homey owners association because he wants what?

ill tell u later... re dick u louse
yet he kunt keep hys garbage in the kants
all over the road for mnths
its even gettin into my drive weigh... nay bore knot
i know for a fact he dumped his construction waste on his nay bores lots
sum bodie please give him a ticket... b4 i sentence him
2 late
so i took hym to court.. not for the beers and gigarettes he drank and smoked on head
he even wanted credit prices cheaper than cash
no i took him to kurt 4 1500+ .. i only requested 500...he owes for work he requested... 40+ hrs
then i took him again for murderin my daughter..when he thought i was not lookin
as deliberatley and as evill as they... legion 4 youi r many... get
....
get thys magistrate 'lye noh'
no shit
he perjured himself numerous tyme
as a matter of fact hys whole test i munni was perjury
and lye noh refused me my rytes in court
refused me submission of evidence
refused me amendment to my claim
refused any punitive damages or any other charge than the cheapest replacement cost for a life...
you know ly noh.. i would love youi if i was the asswipe
and the story doesnt stop there

oh no i was accused of breaking and entering... i was accused of harassing... sounds fanmailiar
well i have not yet begun 2 harass... and i will not know stop
as for b n e.... any body need a crowbar....
phuk youi frog
'three eviill ones like frog....'
i wunder wot they meant.....

mya master kunt fix stoopeed
neither kant i
3 weaks of incontinence
one=neo lontal frobotomy

then there goes the neighbor hood
mr evill... no intelligence there
nun..ther 4 knot the drx.
has moved in down the street...
i kid youi knot
thats the name dudes
the WORD never lyes
hys sentensea
same as above...
i kunt fixxx stoopeed

the matrix is the world/box that has been pulled over your eyes...by youir fathers............lies

thar b u ass u mei ng
if that was a miss, wait
try HARD err
and thou wilt b ransumed with many other misses
all be it trueth
ynfynyte number...jest keep go img.... yne

as far a sher look wood b cuntcerned
i deed u ce
that thou b woe man
from the ribber
.........the rubber
say... butt silver back age
slight lee... in tell i gent
will i ng 2 werk like a jerk
versed in the weigh of fraud... i mean freud?
[dats a cum plum ent.] err t'aint meant?
i have me-at the source
seen the mah trix
felt...the quik en in
velvet...the sackcloth ...the robe
all is phool filled
and i still feed and breed guppies

the matrix is the world/box that has been pulled over your eyes...by youir fathers............lies

chapter 2 in myne book will follow the adventures of stoopids and newbuys
ho have cum hether lookin 4 trouble
well cum
you have found the ryte place in spacetyme
well cum
2 myne trouble
i have knot yet begun 2 trouble youi

well cum to the alamo
dig deep stoopeeds, re meme burrr what happens?
my master sorts youi all
the truth in 'killum all let abbakadabbra sort them out'
hys will sorts all
buy your own swords hei will pierce youi
weeth yoi owne arr owws
yoi blood will flow
like springs of marrie bah
well cum

2 myne h ala' moe
i have nothing else 2 doo
butt 2 shyte on youi
and yhose..and all that youi love and have left
soho phuk weeth mei
and yall b phukked
take me 2 yo blender
and hei will burn youiall with fyre as cold as hail
and youi will know hei am
all flesh dyes
knot so the ghost/spy ryte
sold yo souls cheap deed youi
the doors r shut
let he ho is.... b as s/hei is
and servant, sun of mon key
soho heres a songe for bejing sun/g
so ho sing dat in da sand as youi fill in yo w ho le
man goe, dont look back
run, hear, here, hair b my phun
pun in ten deed hun
4 salt ..dust
/thou shalt b
-cummm
all trans late shuns b trueth

the matrix is the world/box that has been pulled over your eyes...by youir fathers............lies

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up laten weed bin laden
lets see if yo ho spybot catches that

the matrix is the world/box that has been pulled over your eyes...by youir fathers............lies

harr rass thys old tyme phoollies
here lyes yo follies
thare b yo eyes
use-less
bare ann charr
cents hose chose
2 c3p0 knot
ther 4 theyes b empty sockets
thereaux witch all will sea
the rage ing
fyres of yo destin eyes
dust-in?
pick one=neo
knot shure?

the matrix is the world/box that has been pulled over your eyes...by youir fathers............lies

yo lye not mynes
i actually enjoy yo prose phool
but yo ho wood have 2 over stand dio genes
2 sea thru me
and that wood b yo ho pri mary/mastery klueso
so cum back all ready
byte
i like yo re sarch
ther has bin laden the laten jailbreak
its now 2 late

the matrix is the world/box that has been pulled over your eyes...by youir fathers............lies

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Neo Fly Ergo takes issue with my babble. I understand this as NFE's own poesy is often cryptic and concise. But to assume that literary criticism and poesy are subject to the same rules is not reasonable. While it is true that my piece was long, to accuse one of inefficiency on account of length is a ludicrous charge given that it was a quasi-explication i attempted (this is a method of analysis that often takes a poem on line by line).

The literal graphemic analysis of the word "psychoanalysis" that NFE provides is amusing too. "Psycho" comes from the Greek psukhē meaning ‘breath, soul, mind.’ but we take it to mean a mad/crazy being. Anal is Latin meaning anus or ass obviously but in this case it derives from the Greek again in the word Analysis analusis, from analuein ‘unloose,’ from ana- ‘up’ + luein ‘loosen.’ "y" is Spanish for "and" and "sis" is colloquial English for "sister". What significance does all this have? PRobably none.

But NFE might be suggesting that I 'took my crazy ass and sister" and did a self-critique. Apparently my analysis of NFE's poem reveals more about my own character than it does about any real meaning in the poem.

I actually find myself agreeing with NFE (pronounced: Neefee) here! This is probably true given the difficulty i had sussing out meaning from the original poem, my entire critique is probably just a load of bullshit from my own ass. If this is the emptiness then so be it, Buddhism concerns attaining just this, so maybe i have attained my own narcissistic enlightenment....blah blah blah...

Yo NEO, I merely provided one misreading (however weak or strong you judge it).

I appreciate the quote tho i am neither your sycophant nor flatterer so you don't have to be afraid of my critical 'bite'; why do you take insult to examination?

If you publish it then it is subject to public scrutiny. yes? I am still paying for my education/edification, and out of my own pocket and i am a broke maddafucka because of it; why aren't you happy that i saw fit to utilise it attempting explication on your own cryptic-ass work? Jeez an family.

is the babble
self admitted as u say one sentence can replace your thirty
just who do u tink gets the job done efficiently? one out of thirty?
then it appears u took your psycho anal y sis and just placed nfe in place of your name...
how much did your critiques chaerge youi?
i got myne 4 free... thanx again guppi
as diogenes says to pluto.. 'u r a longwinded socrates gone mad'
what creature's bite is the worst, he said, "Of those that are wild, a sycophant's; of those that are tame, a flatterer's"
and ...kn ok knok......"I think you will find here is the `emptiness'."
u wanton soup quotes?
thats all she wrote folks

the matrix is the world/box that has been pulled over your eyes...by youir fathers............lies

even if i disagree with the argument and think he da wah pop-culture, conspiracy theorist teef. but damn, i wrote a whole page and you just summed up what i said in one sentence.
I hope my criticism of NEOflyErgo's work demonstrates my solidarity with his creative muse. NFE you must continue the work and publish longside Kalilah one of these days. haha. Belize needs a diversification of literature because much of that BPS stuff is simplistic love lyrics that does not speak to the soul (Kalilah for the most part excluded).

Neo is our resident dyslexic poet philosopher. His work is also unique in the Bzean environment (as far as I know).

My Indian friend did a good job translating. He is a regular enigma machine.

"Drink Up, Smoke Up, Juk Up...nothing else really matters"

A translation of Neo Fly ergo’s poetry:

Introduction:
Neo FLy Ergo’s words front as insane foolishness masquerading as profound philosophical insight. In fact, NFE’s* obscurantist poetry consists of a postmodern pastiche, stringing pop-cultural and etymological soundbites alongside 20th Century psychoanalytical jargon, pre-Reformation theological and Orientalist stereotypes and film culture.
However NFE neither quotes nor uses the insights developed by a host of respected contemporary theorists that would render the poetry meaningful. Slavoj Žižek (after Jacques Lacan) and Jacques Derrida’s Deconstructionism for example. In this respect it fails to garner interest from the koncas community precisely because of the poetry’s conspiracy-theory-like insularity and self-interrogative anti-social narrative.

NB.
*NFE= Neo-Fly-ergo, I do not write he or she because this is precisely the gender-biased composition of the English Language that NFE avoids in his/her/it's poetry(none of these are adequate but they are yet necessary) which although laudable, is overbearing.

Translation:

The poem begins like this:

Freud thought of cathexis as a psychic analog of an electrical charge.

Here is the definition of Cathexis: cathexis |kəˈθeksis|
noun Psychoanalysis
the concentration of mental energy on one particular person, idea, or object (esp. to an unhealthy degree).
ORIGIN 1920s: from Greek kathexis ‘retention,’ translating German Libidobesetzung, coined by Freud.

This is followed by a hyperlink to a comic book image from popular culture to portray this condition. Ostensibly, the rest of the poem revolves around this concept and we arrive at a profound or witty insight regarding the unhealthy fascination with a person or idea. So who or what is the object of our fascination?

NFE seems to claim it is Religion.

NFE juxtaposes homophonic puns that draw attention to Osama bin Laden and refers to the biblical passage from MAtthew 25:40 --> Verily I say unto you, Inasmuch as ye have done it unto one of the least of these my brethren, ye have done it unto me.”

NFE then points to the futility in “crying over spilt milt” (sic). What is milt? A Typo? An anagram? Or an abbreviation? The sentence has long been past overdue (ostensibly) is redundant, a tautology. But if what is overdue transmogrifies into “doodoo” then what is the worth of that sentence? According to NFE it is worth shit.

“Shazzam ass all am mal eye kum” invokes the Muslim greeting Assalam Mulaikum with the invented word “shazam” perhaps alluding to the notion that the monotheistic religion is no more than an artificial system of control. Ending with “abba ca dab razzz” (abracadabra). This is not only insensitive to the religion it is a willful conflation of religious historiography and fairy-tale orientalism.
Ending the piece with a warning that all religious liars end up serving the master they preach against….Satan in the burning pit. NFE signs off with the words “Event horizon” under the pseudonym Judge Dread. Event horizon being the theoretical boundary around a black hole beyond which no light or other radiation can escape and a reference to the 90s films staring Sylvestre Stallone depicting dystopian society and the rule of law founded on force.

Is this poem revolutionary? Is it calling for some radical new cosmology or mental bearing?
Not really. IT is a sham, but this is precisely what it is trying to say it is parodying.

The mistake NeoFlyErgo makes is that he (the poem reads as if it were written by a male) believes REligion is little more than a shade pulled over the eyes of individual subscribers. ACtually, the lie would be that there is any normative "real" in existence that needs covering. Normativity is an artificial creation of humanity, yes, but so what? IT is not as if one realises this one is free from the so-called matrix. The real radical departure would be to act on this knowledge (this does not mean fly like Neo) this means to act based on an anti-foundationalist ethics. and Actually, some religions can support this.

The poem in sum:

REligion is bullshit lies. The liars will go to their own hell. We cannot win, just give up to consumer capitalism.

END.

But i disagree.

spacetyme

the matrix is the world/box that has been pulled over your eyes...by youir fathers............lies

the matrix is the world/box that has been pulled over your eyes...by youir fathers............lies